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Flash Reviews: 13
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'Twas a bit chubby as a lad,
and thus he was teased quite bad,
they had called him 'Khale the Whale.'
Silliness aside, that was very good, graphically. It was lacking a story, though I assume that will be covered in the next episodes. I'll be looking forward to seeing how this develops.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I like that. Thanks man.
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Yeah, it doesn't have alot in the story department. That doesn't stop it from being the best animated peice on Newgrounds.
Ha! I got reviwe #1000!
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Nice toon, Ranoka! Can't wait for the next one. :)
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Very good work, I hope to see the next installments of your world if Viridarium. :)
It could have used more sound, though. It just seemed oddly quiet during the whole trip on the leaf (some kind of scraping noise would have worked perfectly), and some ambient forest-life sounds would have fit in at the beginning. There also could have been a nic e, big SPLAT! at the end when he hit the mud face first.
Author's Response:
yah I know, there was a part where he flew into the mud and slid, but it was cut due to me wanting the music to fit more for the "dun dun" part after the joke. Anyway, I’ll keep in mind the scraping noise, I tried some forest noises but it took away form the music. Thanks for the Advice, and Thanks for the comments.
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It was fun, but a little short. I also kind of expected the ball's velocity to be affected by how close you clicked to it.
My score was 14,320.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I can get 18,000. Submit your score.
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Me disculpo, yo no hablo mucho español.
Es muy bueno! Yo pongo en mi favoritas!
I hope to see more animations from you!
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This is an interesting little game you've got going on here. It definatly looks like an NES game, and plays just about like one, too. In fact, the concept of the game is just about crazy enough to be from Nintendo! (Jet Pack Ninja! Go!! :D)
The controls are a little confusing, and the Pause function and Spikeball Mode should be programmed to toggle on a single button instead of two differet ones. This can be done by setting true and false to variables like "pauseOn" within the onKeyPress scripts and using "if" statements to see if the variable is set to true or false.
The graphics leavealot to be desired, though. You're probably going for an 8-bit style, but it could look so much better in a 16-bit SNES or SEGA Genesis style.
In all, I hope to see the final verison of this!
Author's Response:
Thank you! ^^ hehehehe I changed graphics around temporarily to use Sprites for Zero from Megaman, fixed the spikeball mode onto one button and made pause menu be a button activated on screen- ^^; hehehehe i was having trouble using the mode you suggested- ive been working on it for awhile.. i had to put in a timer between or it would just transform a bunch of time when you tap the button.. ^^; any other suggestions? :)
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Looks cool, TFC! Good luck with the competition. :)
It'll be interesting to see where you take your talents in animation.
BTW, I've never seen a fighting game where you can drink virtual soda!
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You gave this a 0+ All Ages "This submission is appropriate for all audiences" advisory rating. Well, guess what. Nudity is not suitable for all ages. If you had given this the Mature Content advisory rating, I would not have watched this and would not have given this submission all zeros.
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"Incredible - cinematic quality in a Flash movie!"
I especially like the music you put into it. The Irish folk music you created fits the movie perfectly! I also found the graphics superb, and how you created this whole different world of Brakenwood. Everything seems alive and has it's own character! Good work, and I hope to see much more from the world of Brakenwood!
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